Rough Cut - Suggestions ??

This is my film it is kind of a rough cut of it if there are any suggestions on how to change it to make it better I would appreciate it. Also please excues the cheesy nature of the song which is Alison by Costello. I have not stuck to the idea of having the film be from the dog's perspective so it is just a really basic film that I used to try and encapsulate the main critera.