Revised Script

New Script Outline

Scene 1: Conrad: Help… Who’s there??.... What do you want from me??... I don’t know what you want??? (This part will be filmed in the Web Cam style so there isn't someone helping Conrad the camera is set up and he is talking into it.)

Then a transition occurs so Conrad is seen in the scene where he is still getting ready to go.

Scene 2: Robert Conrad here (the date) Looking forward to going off to a warm place and getting away from the cold winter months not sure what I am going to find feel a little nervous but I got to get out there and just see how it goes. (Agian shot web cam)

Scene 3: Conrad: Well it’s now (the date) and I have just seen the news obviously it’s terrible what’s happening out there and it has just made me really want to go and see how the people are surviving and whether there is any hope for the future. ( over the shoulder turns to talk to the person behind the camera)

Scene 4: Conrad: Hello there again it’s Robert still here I am just packing up my stuff leaving tomorrow very excited not to just get there and do my job what I have been trained to do. So yeah just going over things again make sure I haven’t forgotten anything not entirely sure what I’ll need either cause no one really knows what it’s like out there do they ?? (security footage style)

Scene 5: Conrad: Just looking over some files to see what I am going to be looking in to and what I need to take with me and just getting ready. (talking into camera helped by someone else)

Scene 6: Conrad: I am just having this final goodbye for now the next time I see you I’ll hopefully be in Syria…. Over and Out…. (web cam footage and tracking shot)